On the Fence

The audible narration: Good variation of voices for the characters. Narration seemed stilted, trying too hard to enuciate too perfectly and succinctly it wasn't natural and sounded harsh and the inflection at the end of most sentences just wasn't quite right. Needed to be softer and smoother. When Kathleen had diagolue her voice was soft, natural and feminine so not sure why the narration which was in Kathleen's POV was not in the same voice.

The story: Great storyline and good characters, the writing is solid however, there is excessive use of a few words throughout that get rather annoying while reading/listening.
The indecisiveness of Kathleen's thoughts can get rather frustrating though I suppose that's part of the drama.
In the first book there is the scene with the knife where Kathleen uses some moves her Dad taught her to disarm her assailant and yet in this second book Kathleen is virtually a completely helpless damsel. I also note that Kathleen gets injured quite frequently over the course of the book and yet her injuries appear to be healed overnight with hardly a mention of soreness or bruising in the days that follow, that's hardly realistic.

All in all as much I would like to see who she ends up with and what other drama follows this trio, I'm not sure I'm willing to keep reading the series.

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