Narration is good though.

AUDIBLE
Narration is good though I listened at a faster speed.
Pity this wasn't better in audible. I was hoping it wasn't as bad as my book review states, but it was.
BOOK REVIEW
Stupid ending to a good series, including the Bad Boy Inc series too. Though the author hints at more books.
I was enjoying this until chapter 19 when it got so stupid as to be tasteless and puerile.
Found Macey/Portia a bit of a drama Queen, an idiot who rushed in rather than plot, even with all her training, and annoyingly mean in her treatment of Ted. She just didn’t seem to fit the KM mom mould for me.
Hard to respect a mother who doesn’t tell her extremely bright and super intelligent and brilliantly clever children the truth, once she knows that circumstances have changed and not for the better.
Joanne summed it up, Macey/Portia was a helicopter parent with a blind spot about her girls. I felt she didn’t really know them that well.
Ted was the nicest guy who has been through his own hell.
He understands about fighting and surviving.
Ted told her to explain so the girls would be on guard but did she listen. Nope. At least she admitted to being a coward.
I put this down for a few days, once Portia again treated Ted with disdain, by drugging him for the second time and then gave in to Ronin.
The girls at least had their young age and the fact their mother has lied to them all their lives to justify their actions. Though drugging Joanne was not nice.
Read to the end but only because it was so close but what a terrible let down of an ending for this series.
Never understood why Macey/Portia just didn’t shoot Ronin when she had the chance and what happened to that gun she had hidden on her person anyway? It isn’t mentioned and I’m pretty sure Ronin would have gloated if he’d found it.
The thought of that psycho being alive is horrendous. The rubbish the girls spewed about redeeming himself was silly. Those girls will never be safe, even with him in prison. But again age.
Where was the big sit down and talk and apologies. The girls for drugging Joanne and doing what they did and Macey/Portia for not telling them the truth.
Also Ted
After the mix up with who is with whom in the last book, I found it annoying that a few silly errors made it through proofreading as in the previous books.
Is no one Beta reading for this author?

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