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The Right Move

Windy City Series, Book 2

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The Right Move

By: Liz Tomforde
Narrated by: Juniper Young, Sean Crisden
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Ryan: I'm the newest Captain of the Devils, Chicago's NBA team, and the last thing I needed this year was for Indy Ivers, my sister's best friend, to move into my apartment. She's messy, emotional, and way too tempting.

But when the team's General Manager vocalizes his blatant disapproval of my promotion to Captain, referring to me as an unapproachable lone wolf with no work-life balance, I can't think of a better way to convince him otherwise than pretending to date my outgoing roommate. The only problem? Faking it feels far too natural.

Indy: I never imagined I'd be living with my best friend's brother, NBA superstar Ryan Shay. Even more unbelievable? He needs me to act as his loving girlfriend who's suddenly changed him into a friendly and approachable guy.

Soon blurred lines make it almost impossible to separate real from fake. Falling for my roommate was never part of the deal, especially when Ryan is quick to remind me that he doesn't believe in love.

I'm a romantic and can't help fantasizing that he'll change, but soon enough, I find myself questioning if sharing a roof with my best friend's brother was the right move after all.

Contains mature themes.

©2023 Liz Tomforde (P)2023 Tantor
Contemporary Romantic Comedy Sports

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Outstanding Performance - Especially Considering FMC Cries A Lot

Basically what the title says: FMC is an ever-positive, rose-coloured-glasses kind of gal and the performance really nails it.

The story is classic bookish escapism, so if you’re looking for fluffy and sweet you’ve got it. Fair warning: it gets sickly sweet at odd points, miscommunication and disrupted conversation are rife, and in my jaded, 33 year old opinion, the heroine doesn’t seem to entirely grow up (there’s growth, but most of us experienced those revelations at 22 and she’s 27), and she still manages to get it all without really working for it.

HUGE TW if you’re experiencing fertility issues. Mentioned frequently. Resolved neatly, which we know is not often the case with fertility issues.

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Looooved this book

I didn’t like the first book in this series but I loved this one the narrators were great!

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Beautiful and wholesome

This is one truly covers al the good stuff. romance, friendship, hot guys ASL and family. Totally good book

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Love

I loved this book so much and I loved the way the Indy got Ryan to open up to his feelings, of all my book boyfriends I think Ryan Shay is my favourite.

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Love This!

The romance is just right! Ryan and Indy belong together. The ending Shay and Zanders both have kids at the end 😭

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Great read

Loved it but I must be in the minority because I preferred book one. Both narrators did a wonderful job and while I enjoyed the storyline I did prefer book one. Looking forward to book 3.

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Love it

Love love love it was sooo good can’t wait to read the next one by her.im excited for her next book

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Love Love Love

Omg Liz needs to write more books!
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Couldn't put it down!!!
Feel in love with the main characters!

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Favourite out of the two I've read!

I had read book three first because it was everyone’s favourite. I enjoyed it, but I think I enjoyed this one even more. The MMC was someone that resonated with me. I understood his mood and reactions, but man oh man does he turn into sweetheart. The story was funny, and thoroughly enjoyable.

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Mixed feelings

The narrators generally sounded Ok. However the male tended to sound non-committal even when narrating powerful feelings.
The female narrator had a tough challenge conveying different male voices. The way the main male character was narrated didn't sound that romantic to me. It sounded more teen than 27 year old, and was too different from the way the male narrator read him.
The story was Ok in parts. HOWEVER, at the beginning I was put off by the main female deciding on an improvement plan for the guy, and his life in his own home. He was doing her a reluctant favour by sharing his place, and she was really disrespectful doing this. This was alternated with lengthy breathless fangirl dialogue which was immature.
Later on I found the story too wordy, long internal dialogues, and repetitive. The whole thing could have been so much shorter and I found my attention lapsing. The sex scenes were often too lengthy and he could play with her emotions and needs after judging that in others.
I did persevere and finish it but won't be one I listen to again.

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