A strong start to a series.

i just really enjoy listening to these stories. they all join up and that is exactly why I keep on listening. I love how strong Lyn is in this story and what he has begun. the only part I didn't like about this was when the male was speaking for the female at times it kinda lost me.

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Love it 💜💜

I truly can’t get enough of these guys and their gorgeous strong woman. I love Connor and CJ . They definitely bring these stories to life. You have to listen 🎧 to this series. Perfect 💜💕🤎💕💜

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so good

loved this story, especially loved sixes character she really was brilliant. I also have to say it was good to see Lyn get his story as well because we have seen a few snit bits of him in other stories
all in all a five star all round for a fabulous story that I have listened to twice now and it always gets better second time round

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not really worth credit

kind of weird. I understand setting up plotlines for future books, and that was kind of good, but for most part found lacking in details that would have hung things together more, including relationship development. too short a book to give that relationship the details it needed for it to make more sense, and often felt like things were missing. narrators were pretty good, though female narrators version of Lynn did coexist well with male narrators voice, so ended up feeling like two different men.

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a confusing let down

1) plot: information overload with no background info to relay it to. imo the author was trying to build a series from information that she may have already established in other books they have written.  Since I have not read her books,  this one had me seriously confused.  It was like starting a TV show not knowing there are tons of seasons previously released that you have to watch for anything to make sense. A warning to advise people to start from the beginning would've been nice.

2) characters: vague at best. There are a ton of characters introduced who have some role to play,  but the author spent so much time introducing secondary characters who will eventually have their own story that the actual relationship between the two main characters aren't even established. How do readers become invested in characters who barely register to one another in their own story? I felt like it went from boy meets girl, they do their own thing, girl and boy meet again and they bang. Fast forward a few weeks (literally, the author speeds up the plot by indicating x weeks have passed) they are in a relationship, more plot building for the series, story ends, chuck in a hea epilogue to appease the masses. There literally was no character interaction aside from a few sex scenes between the two main people. The main characters interact more with secondaries than they do themselves.

3) narrators: CJ Bloom does good snarky, sarcastic fems and her narrations tend to be pretty good so I gave this book a go from start to finish even though I wanted to give up. Connor Crais is a new one to me, but his voice is alright, it fits the gruff alpha, but this lackluster story and the lack of character traits/development did not help him bring out any personality for "Lynn". I feel bad for good narrators when books are just poorly written.

Don't waste your credit. if you want steam, you're better off looking elsewhere. if you want a good story with an hea, it won't be found here eventhough there is a hea. I don't rate or review often, but I had to say something in hopes of saving someone else the hassle of returning. if this author has hardcore fans who love her books,  that's awesome.  They may have been the ones who have read her stuff from the beginning who have more bg info to go off of,  but as a newbie, I was left wanting.

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