A new adventure!

I’m enjoying the story so far. I love that I can listen to this around my kids without foul language issues interfering. I like the narrator in general but his character voice’s are so off and grating I’ve chosen to read it myself instead. All his characters sound like some version of gruff dwarves. And while he narrates in a pleasant and normal tone, when he switches to the MC he near shouts the dialog! And his Sela voice is so… wrong, on so many levels. The story is good, just feels a little amateurish and like it needs a more observant editor… there’s little plot points that are what they are, until later these little details flip flop all of a sudden. Like a boy identified as Jason makes it a point to say only his parents called him that, and he wanted to be called Jay. Okay fine. But later there’s this whole drama over him wanting to go by another name and he has this whole teenage flip out over only his parents calling him Jay🙄 😑 okay. Little annoyances that all boil down to me overall enjoying the story while frequently giving the author mental side-eye.

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