Good but definitely not great

This is NOT a dark romance. The BDSM in it is actually really well done - trying to educate the reader on the dynamics and motivation rather than the H just being a dominant a@#hole.

Unfortunately there are major plot holes which were annoying but given it is fantasy I guess the author had some leeway. The h is supposedly in hiding from people wanting to kill her. She is the daughter of one of the richest men in the world but decides to sell herself to a stranger for a month rather than ask her father for money???

It was far more lovey dovey than hard dark romance. The H tries to "break" the h by taking her on a hike and making her carry the water? This is a woman he has been hunting for 6 years - who has destroyed his life and he doesn't seem to have any real plan other than to have sex with her and to tae er to his dad?

The female narrator was good but the male was AWFUL! His female voice made me cringe and I almost couldn't finish the book.

Lastly trying to make this out to be a series of 4 separate books has made me decide not to give this author any more of my money. It is one book that has been carved up with a cliffhanger ending in each one - the only reason to do this is greed on the part of the author.

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