Good plot but..

Lance Greenfield did a fantastic job! One of the reasons I actually chose to get this audible. Daisy Jane was a good female narrator but she wasn’t believable when she was imitating Mally.

Very slow story to start off with, we only see any real action the end of chapter 6 with Mally pleasing himself.

There are 2 instances where the heroine Sam talks about pleasing herself yet there is no elaboration or actual scene describing this which is disappointing.

Also definetly would’ve preferred more dialogue between Mally & Sam during s*x, would’ve made this book more hotter.
There were quite a few s*x scenes that were mentioned in passing that could’ve been elaborated on but weren’t, for instance when Sam & Mally got back from shopping & they were in the kitchen..

There were 2 other role play scenes that we read about but we’re not detailed or explained, which was a let down- would’ve liked the book to focus on more of these role play in details- the book is meant to be about role playing consent isn’t it?

This book really needed a lot more dialogue for this book to be considered very spicy.

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